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Writer's "Block"

Started by wither-I, Apr 24, 2008, 03:40 AM

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wither-I

I thought I would open a new thread so that the few people on this board that enjoy posting or would like to start posting their writings regularly, can make it all happen in here... If yall dont think its a good idea or if you think it could work out in a good way (and prefer the old way) please respond. always just an idea to be contracted...

this is our block now.

[use bright colors if needed].

i think we're great now.

bless.

"coming into the nearness of distance"

theshadeisatool

Fantastic idea mr wither, bitchin' infact! I'd rather have words put where people can discuss and/or demolish as required rather than be isolated. So how we doing this?

theshadeisatool

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occipudding

nice job shade.  another on-spot:

Spurned and arpeggiated
I'm wafting through these frequencies
As only I can
And what I see and what I feel decussate in slo-mo
It burns like pictures of Allah
When will I get all this right?
I'm blinking with one eye in the mirror
Just to see someone winking at me
And I'm thinking of Bambi
It's just a sad story about venison
And John Frusciante is just a junkie with soul
machete!  meow

theshadeisatool

damn good occi-p - as per normal

"And what I see and what I feel decussate in slo-mo
It burns like pictures of Allah"

is this the way to go with this thread by the way?

theshadeisatool

#5
'3D Screensavers!'

Aggh
My eyes.
Sawdust around their peripheries.
And my house.
My house smells just like hers.
Just like hers -
After a drunken night.
Like any other.
Any other -
After we've shared the dark.
Like any other.
Any other -
After we've pulled gray down.
Well I've done it again...
Done it again!
Reply #961

Deftones-argentina


wither-I

Quote from: theshadeisatool on Apr 25, 2008, 01:16 AM
is this the way to go with this thread by the way?
yeah i guess so! im really glad this idea has been set off!

doing awesome work guys!

ill be back soon i have class..

keep up

bless.

"coming into the nearness of distance"

wither-I

i like the "freestyle" this thread has assumed.
i just got out of sociology and philosophy so im feelin kinda inspired,
here's my go ahead...

to the full squander of a barely driven pursuit
delicate withdrawl -a sub-solemn surrender,
waging nothing to a barter of  "all",
worth passed away from choking the trick,
bet the pass will keep your conscience dry -though captively clean.
Ebb the visual casualties of falling notice,
delighted revolt the absent away -barrading unto the polar direction,
with a glamorous escape draped in vivacious white banner,
-cursed the colors a bland.
matte fuss,
vibrant hollers,
bellowed screams,
-bludgeoning the trees down to simple seeds,
and burning the ocean to organic ash...
wounding the air,
gaping lacerations,
fucking "all" time and space,
-a throbbing phallic rage of war and envy.

"coming into the nearness of distance"

wither-I

Quote from: occipudding on Apr 24, 2008, 10:59 PM
It burns like pictures of Allah
And John Frusciante is just a junkie with soul
Quote from: theshadeisatool on Apr 24, 2008, 10:10 PM
Paper hurts
When you don't get empiricism
Words cut
Efficacious dune

Professions collapse
When I'm this illiterate
fucking madd love for this!

bless you both.

you have made this board that much more.

and i feel just like that...

more

"coming into the nearness of distance"

occipudding

Quote from: wither-I on Apr 25, 2008, 08:16 PM
i like the "freestyle" this thread has assumed.
i just got out of sociology and philosophy so im feelin kinda inspired,
here's my go ahead...

to the full squander of a barely driven pursuit
delicate withdrawl -a sub-solemn surrender,
waging nothing to a barter of  "all",
worth passed away from choking the trick,
bet the pass will keep your conscience dry -though captively clean.
Ebb the visual casualties of falling notice,
delighted revolt the absent away -barrading unto the polar direction,
with a glamorous escape draped in vivacious white banner,
-cursed the colors a bland.
matte fuss,
vibrant hollers,
bellowed screams,
-bludgeoning the trees down to simple seeds,
and burning the ocean to organic ash...
wounding the air,
gaping lacerations,
fucking "all" time and space,
-a throbbing phallic rage of war and envy.

this is awesome.  no lie.  love the flow and choice of words.  gives me a feeling of angst mixed with helplessness, which is what i feel most of the time.  thanks for posting.

and thanks to you both shade and wither for el praises.  maybe ill post something else after work tonight.
machete!  meow

Deftones-argentina

robert smith should come to this thread and steal from you guys, so that he finishes the new cure cd.

wither-I

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Quote from: Deftones-argentina on Apr 26, 2008, 10:21 PM
robert smith should come to this thread and steal from you guys, so that he finishes the new cure cd.
i dont know if this is a compliment or a blast.

either way, thanks for stopping by.

and bless.

p.s. all of my stuff becomes copyrighted with the quickness. my unkle is an art broker and just starting lately, everytime i write something i email it to him and he stamps it dry... right now im actually working on compiling a hoard of poems for publish (just need to touch up a few) and also a novel in the works. maybe even a prose epic poem in the near future.

thanks and praises guys :)

"coming into the nearness of distance"

theshadeisatool

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wither-I

Quote from: theshadeisatool on Apr 27, 2008, 02:03 PM
Good shit guys!

I'm starting to experiment with prose a little now. Tell me what you think of this excerpt:




Here's where the neurosis takes over. Where the fuck's the discipline?

"And all this before Bush leaves office?" -

- I hear the TV weep.
     You could say this Thursday night was just the advancement/middle/closing-chapters of a long narrative that started somewhere in that dire adolescence, probably earlier. The stumbling over papers and clothes in a near drunken room-walk. "A state that doesn't look like Swiss-cheese" he says.
     There's a seminar I must attend tomorrow morning. That stipulates a 6:00am rise. It's 1 o'clock already. Aw, poor him. Rockaway. Okay, its not the end of the world, but from this end the prospect of a lush escapist slumber being cut short for some shitty, difficult, tough-textured focus group of these sick little received-pronouciation sub-bland scene kids does not quite fill me with gall.




Just trying to develop some kind of style. Comments bad or good appreciated. I trust your judgments (US) judgements (UK) - or is it the other way around???
i like. very interesting, i got a little Hunter s. t.. vibe and also Anthony Burgess in there. are you from the UK?

"coming into the nearness of distance"

theshadeisatool

I am indeed from good ole Blighty.

Hunter S. Thompson is a major influence, it would be a major compliment if there's any stand of his style in what I write at all! Ever since I read Fear and Loathing I've wanted to do an article gonzo-style or something! Drug-fuelled bender!

Thanks man!

wither-I

always delighted to hear your stuff. and yes fear and loathing was actually the first book i ever read (by choice, like went out and bought it to read during my free time haha). his work is such a major influence on me. its really just majestic... time will martyr him i guarantee, he was before his time you know....

bless this "block".

"coming into the nearness of distance"

samson simpson


Grandulon

Writer's Blockage
the Tyrant's clocked in
minor squabbles while pyros spark piff
riots rockin, fighters flock towards higher conscience
I might've lost sense widda whole heep of Uriah's false shit
head kinda soar, the type to startle a tribe who slaughters rhinosaurs
for nicer garments, nihilists waltzin empires of horror
enticed on provin how life is sordid.  Inspired Macabre
smile with the odd ones straight style of psycotics, nice if they'd all come
late night in gibraltar, pace lightin the chron up
speak kindly on each found seen around since dazed minds'll dissolve
when fate's slightly evolved your face time with the monster
:-X


theshadeisatool

Wow, good shit. Like the last line in particular. And welcome to the thread yo.