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record review haikus

Started by raynor, Jan 22, 2010, 02:34 PM

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raynor

Why the hell not?


Atlas Sound - Logos

Walkabout with Noah the best
Can't help loving the rest
The whole album is wicked

theis


raynor

#2
come on then, do one!


edit: haha wtf, i realized I messed my haiku up!

alright it's suppose to be

5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllabes

raynor

daft punk alive 2007

these french dudes can merge
better than the real thing
makes me wanna dance

Crazylegs

still something is wrong
see the line in the middle
6 is not 7

Jacob

Quote from: Crazylegs on Jan 22, 2010, 03:21 PM
still something is wrong
see the line in the middle
6 is not 7

pwning people with an haiku is something you see way too rarely.
pray nightfall release me
then i could wander, wander to deep sleep

raynor

Quote from: Crazylegs on Jan 22, 2010, 03:21 PM
still something is wrong
see the line in the middle
6 is not 7

Do not count my first
I do know I messed up son
Still like the album

wither-I

great idea!!


russian circles -geneva

cosmic orgasm
empires lost amongst static
ambience takes gain

"coming into the nearness of distance"