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Random Poem

Started by DeftonesNZ, Jun 18, 2013, 07:28 PM

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DeftonesNZ

I don't know if this a poem or lyrics of whatever but I randomly just get the urge to write things usually late at night. Anyway this is mainly to try encourage other people to share their stuff, I'm always interested to see how other people write and I know there are some creative people on this board. Also if you think it's shit you can tell me lol I don't really care I'm just curious to see the different interpretations people get from the same words.

I'll take you whole
Now that you're weak and anaemic
Because the fault is my own
I should have let go
Burn out together?
Or fade on our own?
Distorted Waves in between us
We should have known
But It's too late now
our oxygen's gone