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Other => Art => Topic started by: wither-I on Dec 14, 2007, 05:03 AM

Title: so i decided to go ahead....
Post by: wither-I on Dec 14, 2007, 05:03 AM
...and write a new one....enjoi!  :-*

[As she soars up to me- I am prized and posed a perched endeavor.
Aquiring past summit due,
she then collapses climatically to the stars- a gala surrender.
As to only flutter back down again,
glaring like designer rains off lavish clouds....
Rain! Falter! Rain! Adore my thirst- quench all natural desire.../b]
Title: Re: so i decided to go ahead....
Post by: Jacob on Dec 16, 2007, 04:39 AM
trying too hard.
Title: Re: so i decided to go ahead....
Post by: wither-I on Dec 17, 2007, 06:38 PM
Quote from: aenemic on Dec 16, 2007, 04:39 AM
trying too hard.
how do you figure that...?
i know some people before have said that about my writings because they struggle to find meaning in it themselves... hence saying "I" try too hard...
Title: Re: so i decided to go ahead....
Post by: Jacob on Dec 30, 2007, 12:56 PM
dude, I was just drunk and being an asshole. sorry.

I kinda like it, actually.
Title: Re: so i decided to go ahead....
Post by: wither-I on Jan 05, 2008, 10:40 PM
no worries
thanks man