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Title: My new Industrial project. Myosis - A Silent Hell
Post by: BlackLeftHands on May 15, 2008, 04:07 PM
I am working on a new Industrial project and I want to open up the creative process to other music fans. I have created a Myspace account that is completely dedicated to one song, A Silent Hell. In this profile, I will be uploading clips of the song as I work on it. Whenever I add or change something, I will upload a new clip. Once there are 6 clips on the profile, the last one will be erased whenever a new one is uploaded. This way, you can keep up with the song as I work on it.

Not only do I want to give you an inside view on this process, but I am opening the song up to outside opinion. Lots of bands are strict about keeping the creative process closed, but I want to do things differently. I want you to listen to these clips and give me your input which could shape the way the song turns out in the end.

I can look at the industry when it comes to current bands in these genres and decide what I want to hear, but what do YOU want to hear? Do you want head pounding hardcore beats? Do you want bass oriented music that makes you want to move? Do you want music to **** to? Do you want harsh/angry/screaming vocals, dark smooth vocals, or psychadelic dreamy vocals? Do you want a combination of your favorite things in Industrial music, or do you want something innovative and new? Think about your favorite Industrial bands and what you like about them most. Make a list of the things you love the most in various Industrial bands, and show me that list.

I am not asking these questions because I only want to make music that will sell. It is definatly not about the money for me. I want to create the project that you have been dying to hear. We all know the album that we are dying to hear, only to find out that it lacks the things that we want most from it.

Instead of being selfish and doing this for myself, I want to do this for my fellow music fans as well. Enjoying the music is what this is all about.

myspace.com/dmmusictest

Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy the process.

- DM
Title: Re: My new Industrial project. Myosis - A Silent Hell
Post by: BlackLeftHands on May 15, 2008, 05:27 PM
I just uploaded ASH 15.  It is what will turn into the second verse.  The vocal style is more of a rap this time and I believe that I am influenced by Beck in this regard. 

Here are the lyrics:

yes it is a sword, as a matter of fact
and when I thrust it in your side
you will know where I'm at
When I open my eyes
and when I take in a breath
It's like a million worn souls are begging for my death
And if I walk this fine line that you have drawn
Do you mind if I look down before I fall?
I wouldn't trust much in the words I say
I'm just another mother fucker who is on his way
Title: Re: My new Industrial project. Myosis - A Silent Hell
Post by: BlackLeftHands on May 15, 2008, 08:17 PM
ASH 16 is now up. The chorus is nothing like it sounded a week ago. The vocals are much harsher and I even scream a few words. This might have not happened if it wasn't for the feedback I have been receiving where people have asked for screaming. I still plan on having my guitarist scream some words or lines to help the edge though. He is coming by on Tue to work on this song and some other stuff with me.

I also added the second verse.

Here are the lyrics so far.

I can't feel 'cause my heart is cold as steel
but I move on towards the burning dawn
I set myself on fire to know what's real
Because the pain is made for the pawn

and if I think twice
Turn around and I will see
death's face staring back at me
but if I think three times
maybe he will say
that today is the day

and you thought you could predict the coming weather
but you have failed
the lightning that forms when we're together
leaves a bloody trail
and if you follow it, you will come to find what's for sale

In our hands is a product
In our eyes is a fire
In our minds there's a silent hell

All that we see is a figment of our lies
and all that we hear is the static from our minds
and if we hold hands and make music with our cries
then this would be the anthem we would scream to the sky

yes it is a sword, as a matter of fact
and when I thrust it in your side
you will know where I'm at
When I open my eyes
and when I take in a breath
It's like a million worn souls are begging for my death
And if I walk this fine line that you have drawn
Do you mind if I look down before I fall?
I wouldn't trust much in the words I say
I'm just another mother fucker who is on his way
Title: Re: My new Industrial project. Myosis - A Silent Hell
Post by: untz untz untz on May 15, 2008, 10:08 PM
Make it more untzy so I can dance.