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Title: So I made a couple songs.. tell me what you think
Post by: Xedora on Jul 20, 2008, 06:08 PM
Me and 13 hours to paradise came up with a new tune

Http://www.myspace.com/ifxever

Listen to Amanda's song

it's really soft and trancy, like team sleep esque almost.

If you read the lyrics along with it in a calm environment with the lights dimmed and you're under the influence of alchohol or the equivelant, it will bug you out haha.


If you like it, let me know
If you think it's gay, let me know.
Title: Re: So I made a couple songs.. tell me what you think
Post by: Deftones-88-05-Deftones on Jul 20, 2008, 06:13 PM
(Yawns)
Title: Re: So I made a couple songs.. tell me what you think
Post by: whodunit? on Jul 20, 2008, 09:25 PM
Quote from: Xedora on Jul 20, 2008, 06:08 PM
Me and 13 hours to paradise came up with a new tune

Http://www.myspace.com/ifxever

Listen to Amanda's song

it's really soft and trancy, like team sleep esque almost.

If you read the lyrics along with it in a calm environment with the lights dimmed and you're under the influence of alchohol or the equivelant, it will bug you out haha.


If you like it, let me know
If you think it's gay, let me know.

you're trying to be TEAM SLEEP.

even the title...

keep working though. I believe something good might come out of this.
Title: Re: So I made a couple songs.. tell me what you think
Post by: kalhan on Jul 22, 2008, 03:30 AM
i think it needs, maybe, a little bit more production... it's a good start, build off on it
Title: Re: So I made a couple songs.. tell me what you think
Post by: Xedora on Jul 22, 2008, 11:31 PM
I don't think it sounds half bad for just tracking, nothings mixed or mastered.

Myspace chews a little of the quality too.

This is my frist attempt to play this kindof stuff, So i think it's pretty good considering.

Hopefully some cool shit will come of it.