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hypnotoad

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Reply #20 on: Sep 30, 2017, 07:31 PM
just us

beyond this
place and time,

nothing
really exists,

nothing
more important-

we have only
each other,

and no one else

to bother.



(fin)
« Last Edit: Oct 01, 2017, 03:27 AM by hypnotoad »

hypnotoad

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Reply #21 on: Oct 01, 2017, 03:29 AM
[note: 'just us' is actually 'relationships meets PvPness,' at least that's how i wrote it.

hypnotoad

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Reply #22 on: Oct 02, 2017, 12:08 AM
just us

we have only
each other,
my love...

and no one else
to bother.




[note: v.2; less philosophical, more lyrical.]
« Last Edit: Oct 02, 2017, 12:29 AM by hypnotoad »

hypnotoad

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Reply #23 on: Oct 02, 2017, 12:20 AM
I'm thinking I should give up... modern verse just isn't my thing.

hypnotoad

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Reply #24 on: Oct 02, 2017, 08:53 PM
magnetized

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« Last Edit: Oct 04, 2017, 02:55 AM by hypnotoad »

hypnotoad

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Reply #25 on: Oct 02, 2017, 10:30 PM

hypnotoad

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Reply #26 on: Oct 03, 2017, 07:00 PM
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« Last Edit: Oct 04, 2017, 02:55 AM by hypnotoad »

hypnotoad

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Reply #27 on: Oct 03, 2017, 07:03 PM
Other than that, I love you.

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« Last Edit: Oct 03, 2017, 08:35 PM by hypnotoad »

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