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Lavation (of the Glaucous Tortoise)

Started by occipudding, Dec 13, 2007, 11:06 PM

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occipudding

Coriander coquette
How I loved you
A gentle spasm with angel breath
A muzzle with the morning dew
Neruda and butane--and we'd watch the sun sink into the sea
And on your wings, I could touch the clouds through the trees
And now I'm gone
Gone--and I feel like a wonderless soul
And I tremble like a dove in giant's hands
Slender, cloudy fingers
Sweeping through my hair
The aura of which still pluck through every strand
Churning in synodic,
You slink and I secrete
Unclasp my hand
Unlatch this letch before me


i wrote this maybe a month, month and a half ago.  it's about quitting smoking weed.
machete!  meow

wither-I

wonderful. and thank you.

i like, "you slink and i secrete"
and, "a muzzle with the morning dew"
and, "a gentle spasm", & "i tremble like a dove in giant's hands".

i like your style cause its starkinly close to my own!

"coming into the nearness of distance"

tarkil

Yes that's a good one... Congrats   :)



If ignorance is bliss, then knock the smile off my face.

occipudding

machete!  meow

thesongyousang


"The Nigger that crime follows, Im hitting fine models
and stabbing punks with broken wine bottles..
I beat chumps til their head splits
then break'em like breadsticks
I sex chicks
I'll even fuck a dead bitch..."